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| very nice, I don't read much poetry but i think you really captured a moment there. Well done....3 sugars please |
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| I try to avoid coffee and when I do drink it usually I'm clearing a hangover...that makes part of this ring true though - although the memory is rather hazy - definately like 'lights dim and eyes shine brighter'- thats a great line. Really good poem. |
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| wow! what a great poem! I absolutely love it. |
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| gee, what a superb write! more, pls. rgds, santiagothor |
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Comment by: - 2007-11-24 07:13
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| I really liked this poem. Excellent display of emotions in a few words. Did I already say I really liked this poem? LOL |
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