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Arrogant moon
leads my brain
into the worst situations.
I find
I'm better off without you,
and still I need you
in the worst way.
I'm a lamb in fools clothing
I can't cry wolf -
my mouth has forgotten how to speak.
I'll just continue keeping secrets
from myself.
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I like what you have here. I like the intro and the ending. It might be cool to expound some on the significance or location of the "arrogant moon." It could make things a little more visual.
