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TaylorB
Taylor Bell
United States, texas, arlington

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Island

Some mornings, after I wake up, I remember dreaming that I was stranded on an island.

Some afternoons, I find myself drifting further and further away from everybody I'm around.

Then there are some nights, when I go to sleep, that I wish nothing more than to wake up; alone on an island.

Maybe someday, if I wish hard enough, or dream it enough, I'll wake up on that little slice of paradise.

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F I Z Z Comment by: F I Z Z - 2008-08-06 13:45
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I can't count how many times I've felt this way. haha
I'm sure everyone has felt this way before. Nice way to sum it all up. :]
peterhattingh Comment by: peterhattingh - 2007-12-09 11:26
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I constantly feel like this. You've summed it up so well. Just another day in my head.
Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski Online- 2007-11-30 21:52
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Ah, Taylor, studying the human condition in 75 words. Nice work, I enjoyed it, crit-free.

Bill K.
metalhead Comment by: metalhead - 2007-11-28 20:23
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haha! well you can't really say any fairer than that!
TaylorB Comment by: TaylorB - 2007-11-28 20:11
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ahhh but see the difference between me and all of you is that i always feel this way haha.
Nothing better than the whole truth.
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