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DawnWilson
Dawn Wilson
Italy, Milan

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A Gray Afternoon

A Gray Afternoon

Standing motionless, eyes like stone, she watches him, while not uttering a sound.
He glances in her direction, but quickly turns away, ignoring her gaze.
The silence between them is deafening, neither of them remembering how things
became this way…neither of them caring.

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santiagothor Comment by: santiagothor - 2007-11-25 08:34
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thanks for sharing this excellent work of yours, i can easily relate to it. rgds, santiagothor
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2007-11-25 06:32
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Wow. This reminds me of feelings I was having lately, so nicely captured. It is like you were here seeing it all, and in such a small piece, the emotion is captured perfectly.
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