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jaygray
John Garry
United Kingdom, Dorset, Bournemouth

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first kiss

First kiss
Love's first kiss, a tender moment of stolen bliss
You're racing heart, a throbbing beat
You're all a tingle right down to your feet
The arms entwine, you smell his breath
You tremble and wait, impatiently anticipate
The moment arrives, in a blink it's gone
But the memory lingers, like ripples on a still lake
Hesitant you linger, not wanting the moment to break
The heat is still there, like a moment of stolen bliss.

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jaygray Comment by: jaygray - 2007-11-25 08:33
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thanks it's always good to hear comments
santiagothor Comment by: santiagothor - 2007-11-25 08:16
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wow, i can relate to this piece of your art, excellent! btw, first kiss is always sweet, don't you think? regards, santiagothor
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