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soldierinchrist
Dylan kantor
United States, Colorado, Arvada

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untitled[some ideas for a title please]

Listen to me

can you hear

children screaming

fora savior.

Can you the pain coming

Listen to the noises,

the noises in the dark,

giving you direction.

Listen to voices the

voices in your head,

lead them lead you

to heaven, listen to

the children,I can hear

you heart screaming,

my heart is with

and I can see the

pain in your eyes,but can

you hear them crying,

no you can't cause you've

already moved on.

I can sense your fear,

let it go and come

a little closer,

I promise I won't

tell your secrets, I promise not to

hurt you, but there they are

again, coming in between us

the children are screaming,

tell them to be quiet, they

savior is coming, they just need to be quiet.

Cause I need to whisper in your ear,

I need to tell you it will be ok,

the noises are back,

the so loud that they might

make us fall, and if we do will you

fall with me, I would hold on to you

I would not let you go, so will you be my

savior.

And God has told me to tell

you that the noises in the dark

are gonna wake you up, so be ready for

grace to burn your fears away.

The children are crying,

but this time it's different,

they want us to dance,

they want us to kiss,

and I feel like I'm in the

Garden of Eden

cause I'm so close to you,

so lets take a walk away from

all this noise and do what we must,

and he had had the choice I'm

sure Jesus would have kissed you to

cause all he ever wanted was a broken

heart, I will gladly give him mine,

can't you see I'm falling like

a star for you, but the voices are returning,

now the children are crying,

they want a savior,

and they want us to dance, I'm in the

Garden of Gethsemane, my tears have turned

to blood, and I'm crying out to you,

and I'm crying out to God

"I NEED A SAVIOR."

Listen to noises,

the noises in the dark,

they will lead you to heaven,

listen to my voice

I will help you find peace, and

there they are again,

can you hear the children's

voices,

they want a savoir,

they want us to dance.

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