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lilchavis84
Jamie Chavis
United States

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In My Skin

In My Skin

In my skin
I can be honest and
This is truly beautiful.
I am perfectly made for my skin.
The world does not pollute,
Words are not expressions of emotions
And they don’t ever hurt.
Body language is everything,
I can tell you how I feel
Without ever having to say a word.

In my skin,
I am a work of art in progress.
My skin is colored in shades of brown
And my eyes are Raven pools
Filled with mysteries, pain, and untold stories.

In my skin,
I take my past pains, regrets, and bad decisions
And put them inside of a chest
Never to be opened
Never to be lived through again
So that I can heal my wounds
And love again.

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Comment by: - 2007-11-25 17:11
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The flows kind of off honestly, and your first part of it, about the world not polluting 'n all, is a little confusing. I honestly thought and was kind of hoping you'd elaborate more as I read. But other then that I liked it. I especially loved what you said about taking your past and putting it in a chest. Very nice.

Luck.
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