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thinktank
Dan Wakeman
United Kingdom, Somerset, Crewkerne

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Love for the lost

Life has never been the same.
Burnt metal
The memory of hot bodies
Torched on my mind
A mind full of what ifs
Did I not tell her?
I wonder why
Tomorrow has come
It doesn’t want to know
Her anymore
The twist of fate
Dealt

Each new bud
Is cut from the hurt
Each new day remembers
The day before
Drink eases nothing

Everyone says the same
Time will heal
Time will……
Fuck time
I hurt now

Will I ever feel the
Same?
How do I go
on?

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ikkinConfused Comment by: ikkinConfused - 2007-11-27 11:02
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This is really good, I was completely drawn in.. I hate it that anyone would have to feel that way, but the truth is sad right?
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