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antunes
Ana C. Antunes
Brazil, Santos (My treasured Island)

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Island

She accidentally passed the corkscrew near the old man's neck cutting one inch of his thin hair. She heard a tiny little gust of air passing through his nostrils.

"I thought you wanted to kill me."

It was by a hair's-breadth.

She reached for the bottle of Champagne, which they had bought on their way to Paris. By taking it with her left hand, she poured the sprinkling wine on his glass first, then on hers, and she put the bottle back on the table, slightly touching her fingernails on the gentleman's scalp.

"Ouch!"

"I beg your pardon," she smirked, "but you are now at my fingertips!" The million-loaded newlywed nodded, all nude in a honeymoon island.

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karjon Comment by: karjon - 2007-11-29 05:59
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Nope - I'm with Sharon - I don't get this one either, Ana. Sorry.

Best I could come up with - young woman has married older man for his money, they are both wary of each other, both toying with the pleasure/pain principle - but I'm reaching for explanations rather than finding them.

Thanks for taking the challenge.

Cheers

Karen
Rachel Escott Comment by: Rachel Escott - 2007-11-28 02:33
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I thinks it's clever and slightly sinister. You have to read it three times over, like it's an anagram or something. I think it's one that will stay in my mind.
RSK Comment by: RSK - 2007-11-27 16:58
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I have an understanding of what it represents, but I could be completely wrong.
antunes Comment by: antunes - 2007-11-27 07:44
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It would be a pain,
If I have to explain (sorry, no pun intended here;)
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-11-27 07:10
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Ana, i'm not with it today. (sorry) Please explain your story to me - is it a sex thing? :)
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