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brokenpoet
Jennifer Johnson
United States, WA

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BOOM.

Self-discovery.
Exploration of the
Constant battle within,
The battle between
Yourself vs. yourself.

This alone is enough
To drive anyone to
A deep and dangerous
Madness... even insanity.
Are you ready?

Prepare yourself for
The collision that is
Bound to come... the
Unavoidable crash of
Mind, soul, and heart.

BOOM.

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bloomingwood Comment by: bloomingwood - 2007-11-28 07:26
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I liked the second stanza. "Are you ready?" It's very effective and a great way to roll into your last paragraph.
JacquieB Comment by: JacquieB - 2007-11-28 06:09
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VERY cool and so to the point...truth...who is our greatest ANYTHING but ourselves? I loved this!
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