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yinka
adeyinka elujoba
Nigeria, lagos, lagos

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a dream about hands

I had a dream about hands,
I dreamt that they could speak.
They said,'Hold us out to other hands!'
It's frienship that we seek.

'Open us,put us in other hands,
All colors-black,brown and white.
When a man shakes hands he understands
He has no need to fight.'

'Offer us to the world held wide
to people of other lands.
They'll see we have nothing to hide
If we show them open hands.'

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BrianNew Comment by: BrianNew - 2007-11-29 10:51
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Reminded me of a painting: 'Love Among the Nations', by Stanley Spencer (might be 'SpenSer'). I like your idea of hands exploring other hands -- the coming together of difference -- or rather the celebration and excitement provoked by difference. Exactly like the painting. Thanks.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2007-11-29 06:17
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Lovely poem full of hope and inspiration! This has been beautifully written and i love the way you have captured reality into this piece
JacquieB Comment by: JacquieB - 2007-11-28 04:45
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Very deep and truthful! You have caught the essence of life..and what it SHOULD be!
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-11-28 03:48
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What a fantastic dream/thought/share/write...
very truthful and insiteful. Thank you, will treasure this thought.
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