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nadinesellers
nadine sellers
United States, Missouri

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Exiled.

Exiled Woman

To follow her instincts,
she stretches toward the light.
To follow her man,
She pulls herself tall at night.

Career of uncertain hope,
butterfly of a woman:
she lives without her springs
against the tapestry of past.
White bird of a child,
she breathes to the calendar
of younger years;
she relives a double life,
to the thread of love and passion.
From girl to woman, she passes
and never tires of it,
she starts over from memory
to future, displaced.

She’s a woman, torn,
who imitates her life.
She imagines being at home
wherever that may be, and
dreams mix with reality.

Her strength is of adaptation,
her beauty comes from pain.
Having survived, savage
nomad of foreign states:
she adopts languages
for thoughts without frontiers
to borrow her dignity.

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-05 11:49
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I really like the last line: 'for thoughts without frontiers
to borrow her dignity'.
I love the idea of that, borrowed dignity.
We are all immigrants really, depending on the lottery of where we plop out (to borrow your code)
Some of us take to our surrounds with gusto - others of us stagger and go, why I am here? Where is this place?
I can relate to your situation. I've never felt at home, only once came close. My favorite line is: 'savage nomad of foreign states:'
An interesting and illuminating vantage point on the subject.
Thanks to Rosiewolf for telling me about you...x
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2007-11-29 09:08
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the dichotomy of immigration is a simple theme; the old and the new, its complexity enters later if the cleavage does not heal well.
i do enjoy the understanding and appreciation, thanks for the encouragement John.
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2007-11-29 07:04
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Great line - "butterfly of a woman: she lives without her springs"

There's a wonderful flow to the words. Simple and poignant.
Thanks for sharing,
john
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2007-11-28 14:48
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thank you ladies, being a poet, you know that some of the best examples write themselves with the help of your hand. anywhere, anytime, once upon a feeling, plop.
this is just a simple piece about immigration/mobility and its personal toll.
Comment by: - 2007-11-28 12:52
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dreams mix with reality...how true.
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