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Billy Jno Hope
Dominica

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Characters

Characters



Dear Jack
Am with your kind
Roseau city pub drunks the sun
Discordant symphony
of Frisco Mexican nostalgia
Somehow'¦'¦'¦
They found you
without listening!
Are you proud?
of my hipness
I'¦'¦'¦..
Awoke
Like a desolation angel
with icarus mystic
I did awake with her
A flame
that kills
Jack!
They surround me
Is that what art defines?
Picture a soft creature
blaspheming art
And it won
Independence jello
A backlash
A system of a down

Jack
Oh Jack
We are endangered
Our dreams exist for madness
but are those
Characters for real?

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seeds Comment by: seeds - 2006-02-14 15:23
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well i am talking about characters i met in a bar.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-02-14 12:44
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I can not even guess at what you are trying to say here. It did not seem to flow very well either.
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