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marinarena
Marie C
United States, CA, La Habra

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Miss Atari

I have been tossed aside
in his closet
way back in the corner
spiders have been having
their way with me since years
I have lost pieces of me
I can’t seem to put myself together

He lost the passion for me
but once upon a time
I was his treasure
I led him into different realms
I was his means of fun and exploration
I was his addiction

Now I realize that I was just being played
and was only the first in a line of boy toys

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Afrka Comment by: Afrka - 2007-11-29 15:57
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Nice piece. Thanks for sharing!
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-11-29 07:53
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clever analogy used here - one a lot of people will relate to!
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