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JacquieB
JacquieB Barry
United States, MI

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Deception

You hurt me.
You filled me with such pain
I almost couldn't go on.
You're suppose to be exciting
and full of fun, you're not.
I never know what to expect from you.
Death is the only thing I know
you will cause me.
You have given me more than my share
of hell.
I cannot even pay you back.
You have the upper hand
because...you are superior
It's funny, to me you are pain
and death.
Other people know you by another name
they call you...LIFE

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pcjunkie181 Comment by: pcjunkie181 - 2007-11-29 19:43
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A nice way of describing a person looked at in two different ways. I think sooner or later we all meet someone that wears two different colors. Nice write.
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