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sarra
Sarra Rohr
United States, Illinois, West Chicago

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For Karjon. A very VERY hyper story.

*this is just in reply to the 'passed/past/pasta' forum bit that we were all in. Critiques? meh. Not too necessary. Though I'm sure Karjon will e-beat me for doing this. mua ha haaaa. *****************************

 So! This is a very VERY hyper story about - nothing!!!!! It's just filled with the very nemesis which Karjon loathes above all things! "What is it?!" you may gasp, and LO! I shall tell thee!!!!!

 The simple Ex.cla.may.shon point!

wheee!!!

 see, when it was invented, it was done so because no one - and i mean NO ONE!!! - had the means of describing happy! exciting! A.D.H.D.!!!! related words on paper. So, someone somewhere decided that hey! if we take an 'i' and flip it upside down, 'i' becomes '!" and whooooooo! Ric Flair now has a job.

>_>
told ya this won't make sense!!!! but the ex.cla.may.shon. marks are spot on! Because I love Karjon and I'm trying to get her over her
" !"  phobia.
 cuz I'm nice like that. ^_^!

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Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-11-30 02:20
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LMAO! You're hilarious! Oops...is that too many?
symonnetorpy Comment by: symonnetorpy - 2007-11-29 23:13
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p.s "!!!"
symonnetorpy Comment by: symonnetorpy - 2007-11-29 23:13
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! hehehe !
Nora Comment by: Nora - 2007-11-29 16:27
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Give her a Glasgow kiss, BoS.

Sarra, you're funny.
Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski - 2007-11-29 15:06
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You're playing with fire. You don't want to get these Scots excited. They're worse than angry, drunk Blues fans after the 'Hawks beat 'em good.

Great little story!!!!!!

Just can't help myself.
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