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fureyaersoy
Fureya Ersoy
United Kingdom, London

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Cognition

A gold ring glittering on manicured hands
a wooden bowl in a Zulu hut
seashells still smelling of salt around the neck of a Polynesian
sleeping bag wrapped around the shoulders of a homeless.
All different personal belongings;
each precious for the owner, enriching their lives.
Strip them all;
only human bodies regardless of color, age, gender.
They all eat, sleep, fuck; all laugh, cry and die.
Just the same...

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fureyaersoy Comment by: fureyaersoy - 2007-12-05 01:35
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Thanks Lou, you were right I forgot to write "of" when uploading. Glad you enjoyed it.Take care.
Fureya
TirzahLaughs Comment by: TirzahLaughs - 2007-12-05 00:33
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Great images, especially in the beginning. You are missing a word in sentence three I believe (still smelling OF). I also don't think you need the semi-colon in that sentence. Aren't the seashells and teh Polynesian connected? Overall, I like it. It has a lot of flavor and images. My two favorites.
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