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He wants to know how to be more selfless, and caring for others..
To stand at the top of a mountain with out the surrounding fog.
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I thought some of the metaphysical imagery was really effective and it had intersting rythmic devices too which seemed to counterpoint the surrealism of the underlying metaphor.
It contrives through the medium of verse structure to sublimate this, transend that, and come to terms with the fundermental dichotomics of the other, and one is left with a profound and vivid insight into`whatever this poem was about.
-Exert from The Hitch-hikers Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams
