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it's weird to be lonely
on an overpopulated planet
where everything is televised,
in color,
just out of reach
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For such a short poem, it has a lot of bite in it. I like how you talk about how there is life, people, and color but its all seperate from you. Like being the audience member when everyone else is in the play. Its a thinking piece. I like it alot.
I hate poetry and this is no exception. No, just kidding. That's the great paradox of the modern human experience. The world's slick and bright and going at 1000 mph and we're just animals wanting basic animal comforts.
