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A Love Story From A 7 year Old
tonight my 7 year old son wrote this to me. I have left his spelling as is:
Hi Dad
I love you
I hope you love me back
If you ever play me on FIFA 08 and I lose I will still love you
And if you ever go enywhere I will still love you
If you ever ever get hurt I will always be there for you
You are the best dad but...thers still more
Your food is nutritious and your nice, kind, active and a joyful dad
It will be terrible when you die I will cry
Its a plesure that your with me
If I could ever thank you
I will never ever ever hate you
You are the most enthusiastic dad
You are great and if you wernt my dad errmmm I really dont know what i'd do
Will you love me always?
This was a love story from James to my dad.
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Comment by: Nora - 2008-01-04 17:53
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Oh, lord. Your son is a gorgeous little soul. I hope my baby boy is as sweet and loves me that much when he's seven.
Especially because I'll lose my ass at any and all video games (the FIFA 08 line slayed me).
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Comment by: Snitz - 2007-12-07 11:26
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| Heh, I was attracted to this 'cause of the title. What the hell does a 7-year old know about love, I thought! Good hook bro, keep up the good work. |
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| WOW...it reminds you how simple it really is doesn't it. What a great kids, you are obviously doing a very good job! |
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Comment by: lucy - 2007-12-01 17:48
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do you tell him he is beautiful
he is, he is beautiful
warmth in heart and soul.... a treasure |
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Comment by: WLC - 2007-12-01 15:39
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| The tears came with the second line--I hope you love me back. Wait until he is 25 and tells you he loves you. The feeling is exactly the same. . .and at the same time it is 100 times better. This is so dear it broke my heart. xoxox |
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