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burn me with your words, hurt me with your verbs,
make me bleed from the solid pounding of your nouns,
finish me off mechanically...
make me afraid to read and not to read.
write to me.
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Ooh, beautifully lyrical. I love the internal rhymes and how conscice and to the point this is. Great first line, really pulls the reader in, and there's a grat building of tension until the release of the final line. Great job.
