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lollipopRob
Robin Michelle Zachery
United States, KY., Middlesboro

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The Snow

The Snow

"Winter is coming!" a little girl yelled
as she held tight on the merry-go-round.

Her braided pony-tails whipped in cold air,
her lips and cheeks red, her breath of fog air.

Her red mittens and matching boots warm with fur,
her thick yellow coat hooded her blond braided hair.

The thick little boy who was pushing her around,
had a twinkle of mischief with a smile half mound.

A wet little sparkle hit her red little nose,
the little boy laughed and said, "Look it's snow!"

The girl jumped off and they both ran in circles,
Rejoicing in their own way, one of natures true miracles.

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lollipopRob Comment by: lollipopRob - 2007-12-02 20:14
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Thanks Dakota and Alzariah. I think I was prepping for Christmas myself in this one. It helps to remember all the beauty of it instead of all the marketing and selling of it. Thanks again guys. Robin Michelle
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-02 05:20
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This captures cuteness - very different to what I'm usually reading, which is great. Some nice lines: her breath of fog air. That's my favorite. I can see this scene so clearly - like a dream. The thick little boy - is another nice line. And yes, it really does make me think of Xmas too. Thanks. x
alzariah Comment by: alzariah - 2007-12-02 00:34
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thanks very much you have made me dreams of Christmas coming and little children playing with snow...nice sharing!!
lollipopRob Comment by: lollipopRob - 2007-12-01 20:07
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This is one of my favorite children's poems.
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