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obelletto
Oreste Belletto
United States, Ca, Davis

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Night Vision

I like to place my house in darkness
and guess.

The room returns in gray,
a photograph
rises out of emulsion--

a slower sight I use to reach the bathroom,
made by ears and feet and hands.
Ah ...

the dark.
The place I wager my steps.

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kissykissy24 Comment by: kissykissy24 - 2007-12-02 09:45
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nice. very atmospheric imagery. i like the line a photograph rises out of emulsion.
alzariah Comment by: alzariah - 2007-12-02 07:23
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it is beautiful and special i have never before read a story that tells the fascinated beauty of the night thanks for this new writing which is warm to read...
taiyu Comment by: taiyu - 2007-12-02 06:39
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Nicely done...where you can almost somehow see, there in the blind dark quiet gloom
sadon Comment by: sadon - 2007-12-02 04:50
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Nice!!
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