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The images I see in my mind from the words you wrote are inspiring.
"Little Black Bird
Fly to where the angels soar
You will always be my best friend
Gods arms need you more."
Each person sees different things in poetry.
And in that last part, I picture someone standing on a balcony holding the bird up over their head and the little black bird soars up into the heavens.
LOVE IT !
You get better with each line.
This poem made me think of the young black men that rise just to fall and find themselves a victim of the streets...Via death or jail WOW!
Favorite:
"Your presence is a tainted pleasure
