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xXLupaXx
A Fang
United States, Washington, Kent

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Cry it out

Cry out the pain, cry out the fear.
Cry out the loss keep crying those tears.
Like tiny moons, they stream down your face.
Reflecting the light, reflecting your pain.

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machendandridge Comment by: machendandridge - 2007-12-05 03:11
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"Like tiny moons, they stream down your face"

Absolutely beautiful line. Thanks for the comment.
carrietatum Comment by: carrietatum - 2007-12-03 22:47
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I think its great as well!
ashabee Comment by: ashabee - 2007-12-03 20:49
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dear lord i love it. especially the moon metaphor. It really does describe the way tears help you release all that negative energy. right on, birdy, keep it up.
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