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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-02-17 15:19
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Yep! I don't understand it, but I must say it is beautifully
written.I like all the imagery. I particularly love the line,
"I am wolf moan courting moonlight", that is one line I
understand. Nice work. |
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Comment by: seeds - 2006-02-17 04:44
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| i meant it like a metaphor hulshizer |
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| "I am wolf moan courting moonlight" I enjoyed that line. very thought provoking. One question though, how can the sun be tantric? |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-16 22:28
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| I must be frank: somewhere along the line the poem lost its cadences, and I found myself reading it more as prose arranged as verse rather than as a poem. |
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| Deep, almost too deep for me at this hour in the AM. This is indeed a complex piece of work and should be savored slowly (maybe its the hour again) like fine wine. I like this poem, very much so. Thank you for the PCP. |
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