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VampiricLove
Abella Delinity
United States, Missouri, Gravois Mills

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Fuck Me Deadly

Fuck me deadly like a doll.
So I may feel this woman crawl.
The embrace of your touch,
begins to feel too much.



fuck me deadly like a corpse.
So I may feel this woman torn.
Like a ragged doll she screams,
where screams have no means.


Fuck me deadly like a picture
where no man can gain its mixture.
I may tear, I may bleed but in this picture
you see, I'll still be me.


Fuck me deadly like a skeleton.
For where sticks and stones may break my bones,
feelings and emotions complete me.



Fuck me deadly like a girl.
I'll make your mind twirl.
I am empty with no face.
I am easily replaced.
I have holes for eyes
and my kisses are dry,
but im still intact.



like a doll I have strings.
To hold up my seams.
Like a corpse I have dreams.
To take back whats incomplete.



Like a skeleton I have bones.
So overly shown.


Like a girl I have things
which arent what they seem.



Look into my eyes of treachery and defeat.
I'm the perfect girl.
for your mother to meet.

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metalhead Comment by: metalhead - 2008-11-16 21:07
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yeah i have to agree.. very inspirational!
AHShadowRai Comment by: AHShadowRai - 2008-11-02 17:17
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Damn inspirational! So wicked and yet darling at the same time. Very unique indeed <3 I look forward to reading more from you.
L Johnson Comment by: L Johnson - 2008-05-22 12:38
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I really enjoyed this poem. Despite the external features deep down is a loving woman.
hx Comment by: hx - 2007-12-04 14:14
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Good work - the last line is perfect. One crit - the correct spelling of the word (3rd to last line) is 'treachery' (sorry, I'm a grammar nazi).
dwightfoxx Comment by: dwightfoxx - 2007-12-04 00:58
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Really awesome. The sound of a hollow soul in desperation of fulfillment...
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