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Beauty's in the eye
Beautiful girl.
Sad eyes,
Sad heart,
Sad mind.
Beautiful words.
Lonely tears,
Lonely soul,
Lonely sighs.
Beautiful ways.
Deep thoughts,
Deep hurt,
Deep scars.
Beauty is everything
Beauty is nothing
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Comment by: Biniza - 2007-06-29 04:43
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Beauty is skin deep and I agree. But as my friend once said, "The only thing imperfect about man is his definition of perfect."
But I'd like to say, "The only thing ugly about man is his definition of beauty." |
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| short and sweet! good poem. |
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Comment by: JDQuinn - 2007-04-13 01:56
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I don't usually read poetry and I'm not expert, but after reading yours I almost felt the last two lines should read
Beauty is everything
Beauty is nothing. |
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| On the outside looking in, yes. On the inside looking out, maybe. It depends if one is beautiful or not. |
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| Very nice. Short and sweet, as others said. I agree with "sudipal"... I wonder if "Right?" takes away from the piece at the end... But hey, your call! :) Good job. |
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