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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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Pain in time

Fear in the skies
Hatred in eyes
Lust in all untruths
Pain
All because of you
Don’t know where to depart
If
No escape from despondency
Only for trepidation
On no account shed that tear
Never being concerned
Sorrow of the mentality
Lives perpetually torn apart
Distant stars are where you are
Nearer
Lives suffocate in woe
Absconder
Chance to find that plane
Eternal serenity
Drawn closer
More time beneath the sun
Further desolation felt
Break down and exclaim
Perjure yourself pretend to breathe your last breath
Escape and now take to the air
Absent
Sorrow in time
Kept sealed
Then faraway
And you escape

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-20 05:32
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Thanks Bebe for reading, everything has its escape in some way, and all share the same escape in the end i guess, people cling to that which we're only given a limited amount of, and use it to spend time with mostly ourselves, we selfishly harbor that time and keep it for ourselves only instead of sharing it with the world, some say its a waste to burn through life too fast i say if we burn too fast for too short a time then at least we've shared our warmth with those around us. thank you for sharing your sentiments. best always, patrick.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-07-20 04:08
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Patrick, I can feel a connection with the pain as it seems to fall through time..."And you escape" nice touch,Bebe
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