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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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Too long separated

The day is bright my dearest
I have succumbed to its light
I find that during our separation
Through me, myself, alone
Find my long desire to be with you
Finding comfort in your soft embrace
And enjoy the evening, kissing your soft lips
When I find my desires strength
Like the night I snuck through
The window and lay atop you
When you grasped me with urgency
In ways I wanted to fulfill you
Those ways that then I was ignorant
How I wanted you then
Your presence and mind
Your body and warmth
Comfort I could only receive from you
How I miss you so
My love I hope to see you soon

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-05 01:44
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thank you, what this poem refers to is a hard subject for me to talk about, so i appreciate you taking the time to read it. i have other poems on the same subject, but i dont think theyre readable noticeable as the same thing. thanks again, patrick.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-24 01:56
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This pulls on my heart....it leaves a heaviness in my stomach. Beautifully written....
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