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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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Revelations

It’s been nice spending time with you fine fair fellows
And what a time it’s been
All along these rich clock towers
Passing through this scene
Not to worry for an ending
Fear not being seen
Don’t tread on these shallow waters
Don’t bend to the will of the obscene
Alas, farewell, you nice fine fellows
I’ll be back you’ll see
Waiting wanders in the darkest hours
Wading past my knees
Follow this ancient watch tower
Miracles to be seen
Waiting wandering floundering flowers
Past revelations unseen
Find the time my wistful mind wanders
Black and bleak

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-05 01:51
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sorry but i recognize songs mostly by the music, not so much the words, but i guess that depends on the song. either way i cant place it, though my age has very little to do with the music i listen to. thanks for giving this a read, i hope you enjoyed it, i always do everytime i read it, i hope that doesnt sound conceited, its not meant to, i just relieve the original thoughts of some of my work when i read it over, and this one always brings a smile to my face. thanks again, patrick.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-24 02:23
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Please allow me to introduce myself....
(please don't tell me your too young to know that song) :-)
Nice work Patrick!
Bebe
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