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Silence,
Dimmed lamp light lit
On a hard wooden table
Between harsh and soft
Smooth
Stolen breath
Heart jumps two beats
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thanks, im generally not very good with these types of poems, but this one just stood out after i wrote it, it kindof grew on me. thanks for your sentiments, patrick.
