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Sweet ocean air clean
Serenity my mind has been
Smooth like velvet sheen
A cross between here and there
A place of nowhere
A field of green, purple, and white
Never fear, never fight
New to me every time I puff
Nothing else could be as abrupt
I know now the reason
I now see the bluff
I comprehend my own meaning
There is a new path in the park
Time over time again
Trust in this one night plan
You have neither your reason nor your rhyme
Yesterday is over
Yes I am
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you should, i'd love to read them. i wrote this mainly as an excercise but i enjoyed reading it, so i uploaded it to see what others thought of it, im glad you enjoyed it. Patrick.
