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Awake
I wasnt to be awake, but as yet Im still unsure of the consequences. What if I dont like it? Can I go back? Do I get a special badge saying "I'm Awake"? Will people like me better? Can I wake myself up? Or must I rely on something else to do it for me?
Is it about being in control? If I uses something else I am not in control? Surely that defeats the object?
Do I want to wade through bullshit? Do I want to know I'm wading throught it? I guess at least I can dress appropriately.
Is there anything to be arfraid of with it? Will anyone be there to hold my hand when I wake??? Thats all I really want...
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| I like this one, i don't fully understand it, but i just like it, maybe because i feel the same somehow? .... or maybe i just like it!!!:D |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-09 01:22
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Someone to hold your hand when you wake, this is a lonely, sad poem.
It wreaks of depression. Stay strong, don't stop writing it down.
Wraith |
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Comment by: - 2006-02-21 06:18
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| :O you said bullshit :O |
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I don not agree with "shaft"! Sorry. But i don't think that anyone really wants to hold your hand unless theres anything in it for them.
How do you even know that you are awake now?
You, we could just be someones imagination. We might never be awake, or we might be deep asleep, creating a whole world for ourselves, with someone by our bed holding our hands.?
You can never tell!
We might never have any ability to "dress appropriately" |
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| Am I just making a biggered deal about waking up than is neccessary? Just a bit scared. |
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