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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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What you know

Suicide
May hide
Those things
That you feel
And everything
That’s real
The things
You know
You find
As you go

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-05 01:17
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thanks for reading and giving your sentiments bebe, just out of curiosity, how did you interpret this piece. to me some of my writing could have multiple meanings, and people have told me different interpretations of this one, so i was interested how you interpreted it. send me a message sometime, hope to hear from you soon. best of luck, patrick.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-21 22:02
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I'm truly hoping anyone contemplating suicide will give this a read over & over until they get it.

Thank you Patrick,
Best Wishes,
Bebe ^_^
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