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patrickfinley
Patrick Finley
United States, Ohio, Akron

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Slide, Clink, Creak

Slide, Clink, Creak
Ah, the fresh air and the morning dew
Vibrant smells fighting through
The remnants of night
A new day, glinting light
Streams of color pushing
Soft new fragrance, flowers in bloom
Creeping slowly, like the breeze
The scent consumes
Brightness blinds
Stinging my eyes with visions
Crack, Scrape, Boom
Slide, Clink, Creak
Swinging air, waft of warmth
The movement
The anticipation
First smile of dawn
Thoughts wrapped around the horizon
Like hands on a steering wheel
Turn, smooth motion
Growl, Cough, Vroom
My engine bursting with life
The first drive of the day

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patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2008-07-05 01:02
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thanks bebe, i love to drive, so i sat down one day and thought what would be the best way to describe my affections for the amalgamation of steel and oil that gets my heart racing, and well this is what i came up with. thanks for reading, hope to hear from you soon, i should have some new stuff up soon, but i never know when i'll have new work done. see ya, patrick.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-21 21:51
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This is a nice way of starting the day with such a beautiful image...full throttle.
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