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Hand in Glove Fit
Happened to notice
a small strip-mall,
anchored at one end
by a psychiatrist’s office,
and at the other end,
by a costume shop.
Thought them to be
the perfect marriage.
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| Great work once again Ron! A simple observation that speaks volumes about the society we live in. |
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| Haha great. There are no filler/unnecesary words, you say everthing you need in very few words, and I think it works perfectly that you leave the rest up to the reader to figure out. |
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| That's got to be off-the-rack humour... |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2007-12-13 09:13
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| LOL! It's good to see you back run. I miss your witty sense of humour and observations. |
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| Oh, I hope this observation is true! Nice one, Hulsh, brief but you've got everytihng there you need. |
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