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drgnflygrl
Caryn Josepher
United States, California

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just half

Half heartedly
sorting possibilities
Half hoping
I’m both right and wrong
Half knowing
there isn’t anything to be done
completely
strung out
with desire
a half still
fighting against the other
a struggle
following me throughout the day
and leaving me
empty handed
in the night

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angelofdarkness Comment by: angelofdarkness - 2007-12-07 07:00
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Well written...I like it a lot. There are many times that I feel just half...
dannykurl Comment by: dannykurl Online- 2007-12-07 04:25
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half like it; half don't........

just kidding

indecisiveness can be the sharpest sword

very good verse
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