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A pin stripe
thin
spider's web line
of hate
draws itself
through velvet
and into the beating heart
of a lover.
A meander of gloom
edges existence
spiking the horizon
fencing in secrets
and storing up lust.
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This is an interesting perspective and also a well written poem. You convey the perspective, the feeling in a meaningful way. I really enjoyed this read.
