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AlliciaZ
Allicia Zagar
United States, Montana, Great Falls

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Final Risk

flowing softly

weaving gently

wrapping my arms around you

our love flows through

stealing kisses away from gloom

here locked in my room

tongues in dual

fingers running through hair

closer, closer

falling deeper

an abyss

disguised with a touch

rain tapping on the window

draw the curtains

darkness ensues

I have everything to lose

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Count Drecula Comment by: Count Drecula - 2008-10-09 14:46
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Fontasteek! I loffed it!
Somethingk toldt me yhue knew I vas in yhure betroom
Standingk in the deep shadows.
Ahnt now yhue rite theese about me.
So Shveet!

COUNT DRECULA
carrietatum Comment by: carrietatum - 2008-05-07 17:04
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This is a great poem, I know everyone has already said that but I like it. It doesn't use many words and creates the imagine perfectly.
driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2008-02-22 16:17
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Sounds more funner than drugs.

ya
Comment by: - 2008-02-20 22:09
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Good job on this poem. its flow is great.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-01-24 18:38
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A sung by Paul Stanley.
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