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yinka
adeyinka elujoba
Nigeria, lagos, lagos

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ocean waves

Why should I be
like the ocean waves
which rise and rise
to fall again?
For no matter how high
it rises,
gravity seems
to always pull it aback.
It has risen to fall
for years of lots,
but yet its waves
will tarry not.
But sayest me this to thee
in the nearest future
its waves shall rise
to fall,
and fall it shall
to rise no more...

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Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren Online- 2007-12-12 08:50
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Very nice. It is a warning indeed. And a good one in terms of environmental problems even. It also has a philosophical edge. So, all in all, good work
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2007-12-12 05:28
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Repetition

Frustration

Sad writing to me. A definite warning to step out of the box and discover a new path. Thanks for sharing.
yinka Comment by: yinka - 2007-12-12 04:26
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for me this poem is a warning! to those who keep trying and keep failing.they are bound to tire out one way or the other...
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