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Kowalski
Bill Kowalski
United States, missouri, st. louis

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Breaking In (Karen's Wee Challenge #21)

Newspapers in the driveway. Letters overflowing from the mailbox. The same lights on all night, every night. I worked on the back door for a half hour with no luck. Then I pushed on a window. Not locked.

Lesson #1: Always try all the locks first.

Climbing in, I headed straight for the silver. Spent twenty minutes packing it up before I noticed it was only silver-plate. Waste of precious time.

Lesson #2: Don’t take anything not worth stealing.

Dumped it on the floor and headed to the master bedroom for the inevitable badly hidden jewelry, cash and other loot in the same old lousy hiding places. Heard a loud bang, felt a slamming impact and burning pain in my shoulder, and passed out. Woke up under guard in the city hospital.

Lesson #3: Some people are sloppy with their newspapers, mail and lights. But they may be just fine with guns.

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Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski - 2007-12-18 18:00
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Um - no comment, Sharon. And thank you so much. I promise to skip your house.
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-12-18 02:52
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Haa haa! Brilliant...and very convincing. Do you own a balaclava?
Kowalski Comment by: Kowalski - 2007-12-14 12:08
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Um...

I plead the Fifth.
citydweller Comment by: citydweller - 2007-12-14 11:20
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Hmm... You write about this so convincingly...
DKav Comment by: DKav - 2007-12-13 13:24
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This is very good! One could almost feel sorry for that robber but only almost. :)
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