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Jeff Wittman
United States, Indiana, Lamar

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Metal Armor Dawn

The time was right. The era was correct. It was the moment his people need him. His ideas, his continuations on studies the people needed. Now he decided to no long pull punches. It was no longer time to slow down and revel in sorrow. No, it wasn’t. Stepping out from behind his desk, he gathered papers he had written. Speech’s, ideas, reforms for his campaign. All things he had done and things he wanted to do. Preparing for many years, many nights, hours. It was finally time.
The time was right.

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RSK Comment by: RSK - 2007-12-18 12:36
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Thanks, for the feedback. The more I write, I find myself using more and more suspense within my writing.

Again thanks.
illProse Comment by: illProse - 2007-12-15 13:21
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I like the building up of tension. It leaves me wondering what his grand scheme could be. Although, a few grammatical errors. "to no longer pull punches" "Speeches" "his people needed him" The title may be significant, but I'm too daft to figure out what it mean or how it connects to the piece. Good concept though.
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