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kiekie84
debbie bradek
United States, wa, tacoma

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to find real love

to find real love
to turn around and see it on your face
not hidden under the shadows of sad eyes
but captured in your bright smile
oh what I wouldn’t give
to touch it
to feel it on your skin
with all its energy running through each finger tip and onto my tears
to have you wash me clean and take away all my pain
if only I could truly just believe
if only I could truly just breathe
with every inch of your love that comes from such a wonderful place
because all my life I’ve been left here to wait
yearning with all my heart
to find real love
to turn around and see it on your face
not hidden under the shadows of sad eyes
but captured in your bright smile
and as I fall from this broken world
my tears hit
shattered on these cracked salted lips
that say such simple words just as this
oh what I wouldn’t give
oh what I wouldn’t give



this poem is very important to me

i wrote it not to long along but some time ago if that makes since

this poem is about finding real and i knew there was only one who could give real love love that wasnt found in any person and i was searching for it little did i know he had always been there waiting for me to Accept him


i now know His love and i have felt it more then ever

PS: it started the day i got saved born again and accepted Jesus Christ

Matthew 18:11 For the Son of man is come to save that which was lost.

John 14:6 Jesus saith unto him, I am the way, the truth, and the life: no man cometh unto the Father, but by me.

Deuteronomy 4:29 But if from thence thou shalt seek the LORD thy God, thou shalt find him, if thou seek him with all thy heart and with all thy soul.

Revelation 3:20 Behold, I stand at the door, and knock: if any man hear my voice, and open the door, I will come in to him, and will sup with him, and he with me.

Matthew 11:28 Come unto me, all ye that labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest.

Romans 10:13 For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved.

John 1:34 And I saw, and bare record that this is the Son of God.

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FlowerChild Comment by: FlowerChild - 2008-02-29 17:53
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Just awesome! =))
SunShinee7 Comment by: SunShinee7 - 2007-12-28 17:14
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Wow, girl, this is awesome. Thanks so much for sharing. It put a smile to my face.
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