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| I like this piece...well written:) |
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| The poem has a very good message. I am all for singing from the rooftop! |
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Ah, a great message in this poem, hopeful and a bit of a challenge. I'd like to sing from the rooftop.
Leaves me feeling good. Anna |
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| Most of the poem has a nice rhythm and lilt to it. With a bit of work on the punctuation and alignment, could make the non-rhyming and out of sync rhyme work for you...over all a nice piece.I liked its message.... |
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I liked this poem, I found it inspiring. But the rhyming was off a little bit in these lines:
"Is there a need for the whole
And nothing but the truth" |
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