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blackswan
Gail Gray
United States, South Carolina, Greenville, SC

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The Quintessential Language of Bridges

The bridge, impatient for movement
Leapt from the riverbank
Arced high, deft as a diver
or acrobat. I rode

the center agrip, appalled.
Bridges are for crossing.
It decided to cross the void
jealous of the freedom

of downflow,
Sensing my fear
cormorant whispers whistled
through knot holes.

Bridge denied the other side
satisfaction; decided
to ride memories of longing.
I went down with the ship,

My old life whistled past.
Bridge became swan.
I lost hold, irreversible
invitation to vertical realities.

I tasted the Seine, measured
descent by drought scars
digesting the depth of tears.
Water planet rulers

hold no quarter for children
dressed in denial.
Chesapeake Bay: bridge as causeway
straddles the tides

begs my car tires for a kiss
the entryway to all
banished emotions.
Fathoms as favors
remaindered from the Barnacle King

and Pearl Queen offered
octaves of cello,
three heartbeats stashed
in a seashell stolen

from the Baltic,
a sacrament -
prelude to breaking
the surface.

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deeshay143 Comment by: deeshay143 - 2008-04-23 05:42
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Very good use of imagery. I could actually see the things I was reading. Very good, I look forward to reading more of your "thoughts."
Norma Comment by: Norma - 2008-03-06 13:52
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This poem really speaks to me. "Three heartbeats slashed/ in a seashell stolen" is brilliant imagery. I feel we may have parallel experiences. To hear my poems, especially, "Houses of Seashells" and "Space Mothlight" with music, please visit www.myspace.com/dnorma
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2008-01-09 23:19
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Wow! This is great. This is my first reading and your poem hit me a couple of ways already. How your mind can move from facet to facet in the face of the observed. How you are involved with feeling for each facet ... as well as your intellectual involvement.

I look forward to the rereading and digestion of your insights.

The comma between "downflow" and "Sensing" somewhat confused me.

This poem is like looking deep into a gem.
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