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nickrazer
Joe Murphy
United States, Florida, Tampa

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The Beast On The Moor

The darkness closed
a wind did moan
the moor at night
I walked alone.

The moon was full
but shed no light
the cloudy sky
hid it from sight.

A distant howl
my heart did race
a cold gaunt look
Covered my face.

The snarl behind
a scream in fear
claws and fangs
my flesh did tear.

The beast retreat
a wind did moan
the moor at night
I died alone.

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tinaleigh120 Comment by: tinaleigh120 - 2008-07-29 21:20
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very dark piece gets emotions stirring!
DressedinPoetry Comment by: DressedinPoetry - 2008-01-20 17:17
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Oh. Dark. I like it a lot though.
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