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DaveyBoyGreen
David Cromby
United Kingdom, Harold Newman's World, Liverpool

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The Crucified Clock

The crucified clock ticks a laugh
ha-ha, ha-ha,
hollow in the hall
hung high from its hands
dripping seconds and days
on the children beneath
sliding from game to game
decanting the time
to sip later.

The crucified clock clicks it’s tongue
clock-clock
a vocalist wrinkled
singing it’s backing tunes
laced to the melodies
left behind
by the soul of this house.

The crucified clock all but winks
as I chase it’s discarded
frowns
left in the halls of my heart.

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drgnflygrl Comment by: drgnflygrl - 2008-01-09 12:27
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The imagery is gorgeous, the ending is concise. You build poems beautifully! Yes, I'm a big fan!
John Glennon Comment by: John Glennon - 2008-01-02 07:00
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kind of reminds me of that Dali picture with the melting clock
larciero Comment by: larciero Online- 2007-12-26 06:06
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love that each stanza starts with "The Crucified clock." I like how we follow it to you. I love that it drips seconds and days.
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