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PBlakey
Philippa Blakey
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United Kingdom, North Yorkshire, Scarborough

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fish brain

Apparently I owe you
a hand job.

Funny that.

In the stomach churning aftermath
a moment of vast
oversight
so obviously out of character

for someone like me.

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Tyger Comment by: Tyger - 2008-01-24 04:28
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Every word a statement and nothing out of place. Well done!
colindardis Comment by: colindardis - 2007-12-30 10:22
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Strange that- how can you owe someone a hand job?! It's not like borrowing a tenner and then having to pay them back. But maybe that't how things are done in Scarborough? ;-p
Lander Comment by: Lander Online- 2007-12-27 08:53
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True to form.
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2007-12-27 08:08
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KEWL. Super impact. Car crash. Nice. Gr8 1st line. Excellent flow.
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