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almagemelas
Alma Fernandez
United States, Florida, Jacksonville

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The Pains Of Goodbyes.

Her solemn face and quiet breathing only bothered him more, she refrained from speaking , She stared straight forward at the door. She knew from the beginning he was not gonna be with her forever and had tried so hard to keep her heart tucked away in a box to avoid any unnecessary pain.
She tried to be the best friend , best lover, the best everything that she could to make beautiful memories that would last forever because she knew oneday soon he’d have to leave. Some how her heart got snared into the game he was playing and here once again she found herself in pain and suffering awaiting the return of her dream come true. Never had a man made her feel so complete only by being close. Noone had ever made her dream so many dreams or had given her such inspiration as this man, the question of weather she should stay or go repeatedly was batting at her brain and she didn’t know how to bring the words to the tip of her tounge much less to release them into the air. So she withered back into the corner of her mind and waited for him to decide it was over. Funny how she has this little spot reserved just for these kinds of times. Somewhere where noone can reach her til she is ready to accept the changes.

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